Friday, March 19, 2010

My First Song - Hindi


This might come as a surprise to all of you. But I wouldnt want to bore you on my very first post in elaborating how it all started and what's the purpose of this blog.

To keep it short, let me mention that I developed song writing skills and would now want to share my compositions with you. For my very first post, I would like to share a song that I consider to be one of my best attempts at song writing.

This shall allow you to determine whether my song writing skills are worth exploring or sharing. Give me your inputs, criticizm, ideas and be my first broad audience.

Here are the lyrics

Mukhda
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Tere bina main kaise jiya


itne sare pal jane jaan

itne sare pal jane jaan

itne sare pal jane jaan

itne sare pal jane jaan

1st antra
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tum milego ... asha lekar yehin hum jiye

raat aur din .. ashkon mein hum jatle hi rahe

tanha akele .. katon pe hum chalte hi rahe

woh ahate .. yaad ati hai

muskurahate .. yaad ati hai

pathrili sabhi rahein hai

sholon se bhare sare safar

anjani lehar aayi hai

dukkhe woh badal layi hai

tere bina main kaise jiya


2nd antra
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Un lamhon ki yaadein satati rahi

Kitne sitam aur kitni batein sahi

Tum humko bhula na jaoge

karte dua yahi khudase

sadiyon tak dur bhi rahkar

wapas to jaroor aoge

meri jaaaaanaaaaaaaaa .. paoge humko dubaraaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Tere bina main kaise jiya (diff style)

itne sare pal jane jaan

itne sare pal jane jaan

itne sare pal jane jaan

itne sare pal jane jaan

Repeat (Echo)
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itne sare pal jane jaan

itne sare pal jane jaan

itne sare pal jane jaan

itne sare pal jane jaan

End


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6 comments:

prahlad said...

This is great. Keep writing.

Anonymous said...

Beautiful lyrics, great composition. Gr8 music.

Pallavi

Devendra Pandit said...

Sahi...good lyrics. I never knew that you had this skill too. Keep writing....

Jay Pawar said...

That is very nice attempt. Keep up the good work.
Like I said the other day.. better than Anu (Chor) Malik.. ;)
~Jay Pawar~

Unknown said...

great song....just remembering our omaha days..waiting for you both to come to mumbai...and to hear all your songs live..please get your guitar along..
p.s.upload your fusion song.

Unknown said...

nice creation...good going...wow...